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This sad, arid, parched land;

Centuries of blood has dampened its sand.

But still it remains dry, burnt,

the heat reminds us of what is hurt.

A people still wandering, lost;

Did they reckon on this cost?

A faith borne on hope,

it’s all they have to cope.

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cadrewolf
22:04 Apr 28 2009

Excellent

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Her juices of deceit lay on the bed

already the lies mounting in her head.

Why does she do it? What of the shame

she knows deep inside that she is to blame.

The thrill and excitement, the trophy the win

only sorrow for her is all it will bring

With body spent and lungs almost drained

just like the bed, she has been stained.

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NocturnalMistress
13:59 Apr 17 2009

That is really good.

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Sinora
14:42 Apr 17 2009

Nice one hon.

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ladygoddessaries
15:14 Apr 17 2009

Not sure the what the reason is to why you wrote this but for me it triggers many thoughts.. Lovely~

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XxXrated
17:27 Apr 17 2009

Makes me think of a lady who basically cheated on their lover and has been lying about that lover being only one they have.

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Cheetahcry
17:42 Apr 17 2009

Good work hun...... Makes me look at a few things in life and some of the lies that I have been told.

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MysticMoon
20:22 Apr 17 2009

wow not ur usual style but it sure punches a point

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TheeLadyHawk
00:15 Apr 18 2009

Wow babe.........

very good

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Theban
16:28 May 08 2009

Lol, very good and reminded me of past times!

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NoctusAngelusProcella
21:30 Jun 16 2009

great pen hon

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Moved to the point of being still,

if looks could kill.

So silent I could scream,

deafened by a dream.

Reaching but never connecting,

always rejecting.

Being there without being seen,

buried under grass so green.

In pain without any tears,

all my fears.

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Sinora
11:06 Apr 13 2009

I just loved that !

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Admired from afar

Looking but never touching

Just looking on in awe and wonder

You outshine your friends

Still they flock to you

To warm in your glow, your radiance

I stay here in the shadow, your shadow

It’s cooler here but it keeps me sane.

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Sinora
14:20 Apr 03 2009

Nice.

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MysticMoon
15:53 Apr 03 2009

i like this alot :)

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Joli
17:59 Apr 03 2009

I love this. I was trying to express a similar concept recently when I wrote a God metaphor story. I ended it with something like, "happy here in the shadow of your shadow." I, too, like the quiet and reflective places in the shadows of inspiration.

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